I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-FOOBAR.txt.
For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication.
Review:
This is very good. Disregarding a few non-technical concerns about
presentation, I only have a couple of technical nits that the RFC
editor might not catch. Since they are small I'm only sending this to
gen-art, author and AD.
2.1.1:
Change "PIM-SSM" to "PIM-SM".
2.1.4:
"Distance Vector Multicast Routing Protocol (DVMRP) [RFC1075]
[I-D.ietf-idmr-dvmrp-v3] [I-D.ietf-idmr-dvmrp-v3-as] was the first
protocol designed for multicasting, and to get around initial
deployment hurdles. It also included tunneling capabilities which
were part of its multicast topology functions."
Is this supposed to be one sentence? If not, I don't understand
the end of the first sentence.
That's it ... Scott
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