Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-rddp-sctp-06

2006-09-27 Thread Lars Eggert
Eric, thanks for the followup! Authors: Please email me a corresponding RFC Editor Note, I will include it in the writeup and issue the ballot. Thanks, Lars On Sep 26, 2006, at 23:26, Gray, Eric wrote: I just had a fresh look at the -07 version of this draft and I felt that all of my comm

RE: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-rddp-sctp-06

2006-09-26 Thread Gray, Eric
Author(s), I just had a fresh look at the -07 version of this draft and I felt that all of my commments were addressed. However, in one case the fix actually makes it harder to read. I had pointed out that MPA was not expanded anywhere in the draft. Caitlin had suggested that a reference could

RE: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-rddp-sctp-06

2006-08-10 Thread Caitlin Bestler
Gray, Eric wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this document. > For background > > on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at: > > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html > > Please consider these comments along with any other last call > comments you may receive.