Heard,** Frederick. And, thank you.
I accept the subjective bit but it’s not quite that simple. And besides, I
am not looking for an in into Goa anymore; which, in any case nothing
should have prevented, given all realities including my idealism, and
skills. A couple of things did happen! Anyway,
Hi Venantius,
Neither did I think I was being attacked!
Just mentioned my opinion that I felt my original photo was made to look
better than it was. It's an opinion, an unstudied one, based on my belief
that in this field a lot of judgements are subjective. FN
On Wed, 20 Jan 2021 at 02:27,
Hi Fred! If possible retract the precious. Here is tcorrected!
I am referring to the design, given the elements used. Nothing more needed,
other than a rethink. Nothing against your photograph. Geddit?! I never go
after people, but point when things could be better. Yes, as designer we
finagle
Dunno about that, since it's not my field. I only clicked the photo during
a chance encounter with Souza a few weeks before his death. Actually, I was
quite pleasantly surprised by the way the photo was edited and displayed...
but again, it's not my specialisation so I could be wrong :-) FN
On
Please do not take offense, but surely the cover with those same elements
could have been more visually appealing!
Tweaking space, visual dynamics, placement of elements, pt size.
No point in saying more., besides that, it behooves designers to observe
whatever examples they (may) spring off of,
New, released in Dec 2020, available from Sunaparanta (Altinho) for Rs 500
https://archive.org/details/vrr-fnsouza
