Re: [homenet] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-25

2023-01-06 Thread Tim Chown
Hi, On 6 Jan 2023, at 13:36, Eric Vyncke (evyncke) wrote: Well-deserved break for the R community, I also took about 10 days off ;-) More seriously, there was a major rewrite between -18 (the first IESG telechat) and -25 (yesterday telechat):

Re: [homenet] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-25

2023-01-06 Thread Eric Vyncke (evyncke)
Well-deserved break for the R community, I also took about 10 days off ;-) More seriously, there was a major rewrite between -18 (the first IESG telechat) and -25 (yesterday telechat):

Re: [homenet] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-25

2023-01-06 Thread Tim Chown
Hi Eric, Sorry, the R world closes for 2 weeks over the holiday period :) I just read the IESG comments now, and your comment that "The flow and the text (grammar, English) had also a rewrite”, but the diffs from 24 (my review) to 25 (new) are very minor and the abstract for example still has

Re: [homenet] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-25

2023-01-06 Thread Eric Vyncke (evyncke)
Thank you very much Tim for your review for int-dir. Even if a little too late for the IESG telechat, I am sure that the authors will take your review in consideration. I personally like your suggestion to add an appendix section on the deployment/operation timeline. Regards -éric On

Re: [homenet] Datatracker State Update Notice:

2023-01-06 Thread Eric Vyncke (evyncke)
Dear authors, dear Homenet WG, Happy New Year ! As you may have noticed, the I-D was not approved on yesterday telechat. The IESG was unanimous to say that the latest revision is much more readable and clearer. Barring the DNS-directorate and the late GENART reviews (to be addressed at least