Re: [homenet] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-25

Thanks for the feedback. We did remove one sentence with ULA but this is correct ULA has not entirely been removed. Yours, Daniel On Tue, Jan 17, 2023 at 9:25 AM Tim Chown wrote: > Thank you for the update Daniel, I am overall happy with the changes. I > suspect ULAs will be picked up by

Re: [homenet] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-25

Thank you for the update Daniel, I am overall happy with the changes. I suspect ULAs will be picked up by other reviews. Tim On 13 Jan 2023, at 19:17, Daniel Migault wrote: Hi Tim, Thanks for the feed backs. Please see how the document has been updated. The ULA comment may remain open.

Re: [homenet] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-25

Hi Tim, Thanks for the feed backs. Please see how the document has been updated. The ULA comment may remain open. https://github.com/ietf-homenet-wg/ietf-homenet-hna/pull/62/commits/cbf182af1bf749f09348a178268d62b745c3d6d6 You can also find some more description / comments inline. Thanks for

Re: [homenet] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-25

Hi, In-line... On 9 Jan 2023, at 18:15, Daniel Migault wrote: Hi Tim, Thanks for the review we updated the file as follows: https://github.com/ietf-homenet-wg/ietf-homenet-hna/pull/62/commits/038395265e821aeeb59ccd3b1ba50c4dbf831a3b Please see my responses in line for more details. Yours,

Re: [homenet] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-25

Hi Tim, Thanks for the review we updated the file as follows: https://github.com/ietf-homenet-wg/ietf-homenet-hna/pull/62/commits/038395265e821aeeb59ccd3b1ba50c4dbf831a3b Please see my responses in line for more details. Yours, Daniel On Thu, Jan 5, 2023 at 10:12 AM Tim Chown via Datatracker

Re: [homenet] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-25

"last-c...@ietf.org<mailto:last-c...@ietf.org>" mailto:last-c...@ietf.org>> Subject: Re: Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-25 Hi Eric, Sorry, the R world closes for 2 weeks over the holiday period :) I just read the IESG comments n

Re: [homenet] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-25

raft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation@ietf.org" , "homenet@ietf.org" , "last-c...@ietf.org" Subject: Re: Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-25 Hi Eric, Sorry, the R world closes for 2 weeks over the holiday period

Re: [homenet] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-25

Hi Eric, Sorry, the R world closes for 2 weeks over the holiday period :) I just read the IESG comments now, and your comment that "The flow and the text (grammar, English) had also a rewrite”, but the diffs from 24 (my review) to 25 (new) are very minor and the abstract for example still has

Re: [homenet] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-25

Thank you very much Tim for your review for int-dir. Even if a little too late for the IESG telechat, I am sure that the authors will take your review in consideration. I personally like your suggestion to add an appendix section on the deployment/operation timeline. Regards -éric On

[homenet] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-25

Reviewer: Tim Chown Review result: Almost Ready Hi, I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF