[I2nsf] YANG Doctors Working Group Last Call Review for draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-dm-06

2019-06-22 Thread Acee Lindem (acee)
I have reviewed this document as part of the YANG doctors directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be

Re: [I2nsf] AD Review: draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-09

2019-06-22 Thread Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
Roman, Thanks for your guidance.:-) Best Regards, Paul On Sat, Jun 22, 2019 at 5:09 PM Roman Danyliw wrote: > Hi Paul! > > Thanks for this revision and all of the iteration. I’ve advanced the > document to IETF LC. > > Roman > > On Jun 22, 2019, at 8:13 AM, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong < > jaehoon.p.

Re: [I2nsf] AD Review: draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-09

2019-06-22 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Paul! Thanks for this revision and all of the iteration. I’ve advanced the document to IETF LC. Roman On Jun 22, 2019, at 8:13 AM, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong mailto:jaehoon.p...@gmail.com>> wrote: Hi Roman, Thanks for your quick review. I have reflected your suggested text on #12 in Section 8

Re: [I2nsf] AD Review: draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-09

2019-06-22 Thread Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
Hi Roman, Thanks for your quick review. I have reflected your suggested text on #12 in Section 8 and the mention about the lifecycle management from DMS in Section 3 on the version -13: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-13 - New Text for Security Issues and Discussion on

[I2nsf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-13.txt

2019-06-22 Thread internet-drafts
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Interface to Network Security Functions WG of the IETF. Title : Applicability of Interfaces to Network Security Functions to Network-Based Security Services