Re: [I2nsf] [secdir] (updated) review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-21

2022-01-28 Thread Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
Hi Tom, On Fri, Jan 28, 2022 at 9:48 PM tom petch wrote: > I see that this is scheduled for a IESG Telechat 3feb22 which may > influence the appropriate action. > > The various ...art reviews have introduced a number of changes to this > and other I2NSF I-D with the effect of introducing inconsi

Re: [I2nsf] [secdir] (updated) review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-21

2022-01-28 Thread tom petch
I see that this is scheduled for a IESG Telechat 3feb22 which may influence the appropriate action. The various ...art reviews have introduced a number of changes to this and other I2NSF I-D with the effect of introducing inconsistencies. Thus 'nsf-facing' now has expanded description clauses (

Re: [I2nsf] [secdir] (updated) review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-21

2022-01-22 Thread Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
Hi Tom, I believe that I have addressed all of your concerns in the following revision: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-22 tcp-flags is named flags because their base identity is tcp and the redundancy of naming is removed. I will make sure that all of

Re: [I2nsf] [secdir] (updated) review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-21

2022-01-12 Thread t petch
Hi Paul! (adding I2NSF and document alias like an official response to a directorate review) Thanks for this review. A response below and the authors/WG can correct me. Chipping in as a WG member, my words of 2021 (2022, 2023...) are coherence and silos. This I-D is one of a set of five,

Re: [I2nsf] [secdir] (updated) review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-21

2022-01-07 Thread Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
Hi Roman, I will review your responses this weekend. Thanks. Best Regards, Paul 2022년 1월 6일 (목) 오후 5:54, Roman Danyliw 님이 작성: > Hi Paul! > (adding I2NSF and document alias like an official response to a > directorate review) > > Thanks for this review. A response below and the authors/WG can c

Re: [I2nsf] [secdir] (updated) review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-21

2022-01-06 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Paul! (adding I2NSF and document alias like an official response to a directorate review) Thanks for this review. A response below and the authors/WG can correct me. > -Original Message- > From: secdir On Behalf Of Paul Wouters > Sent: Monday, November 29, 2021 4:06 PM > To: secdir