I am basically OK with this document.
Some comments you may consider though:
- Should you add aa [TODO] to section 5.1 which states that
the editor of the document should describe the Textual
Conventions (if any) in the MIB module?
- I wonder if guidance is needed that they can leave out sect
Jeffrey Hutzelman wrote:
> handled by the RFC-Editor
Yes, while I was at it I simply noted all observations.
['exist a number of' vs. 'exists a number of']
> the original text is correct
Now that you say it, I read this recently:
http://www.askoxford.com/asktheexperts/faq/aboutgrammar/numbero
I note, belatedly, that draft-altman-telnet-starttls-02.txt has a normative
dependency on draft-altman-tls-channel-bindings-XX.txt (rightly so IMO) which
in turn has a normative dependency on draft-williams-on-channel-binding-00 which
in turn is some way off completion
As such, I consider a Last
The document has Intended Status of Standards Track but includes a
Normative Reference to RFC 3022 which is am Informative RFC. According
to RFC 3967, Section 3, the need for the downward reference explicitly
should have been documented in the Last Call itself. I believe that
either the Last Call n
Brian, Tom,
>> Who is shepherd for an individual submission?
>
> The sponsoring AD. However, draft-iesg-sponsoring-guidelines
> (which will be updated shortly, so don't worry about
> its terminology issues) adds:
>
>Once the AD has agreed to sponsor a document, the authors need to
>provide
On 2007-01-18 09:49, Tom.Petch wrote:
Who is shepherd for an individual submission?
The sponsoring AD. However, draft-iesg-sponsoring-guidelines
(which will be updated shortly, so don't worry about
its terminology issues) adds:
Once the AD has agreed to sponsor a document, the authors need
Who is shepherd for an individual submission?
Tom Petch
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