Re: Last Call: draft-ietf-l3vpn-2547bis-mcast (Multicast in MPLS/BGP IP VPNs) to Proposed Standard

2009-10-20 Thread Pekka Savola
I'll only comment on a couple of followups below. I think I've described my POV and I probably won't do further follow-ups. On Mon, 19 Oct 2009, Eric Rosen wrote: Pekka>At the minimum, the status (intent) of the spec should be Pekka>clarified. Even better would be to improve and include

Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-e2e-rsvp-te-reqts-04

2009-10-20 Thread Ben Campbell
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-l3vpn

Review of draft-ietf-dna-simple-09

2009-10-20 Thread Bernard Aboba
Review of draft-ietf-dna-simple-09 I have reviewed draft-ietf-dna-simple. Overall, I believe this document still contains significant technical issues that need to be addressed before it would be suitable for publication as a Proposed Standard. In particular, the version of the document sent to

Re: [Uri-review] [Fwd: [BEHAVE] Last Call: draft-ietf-behave-turn-uri (Traversal Using Relays around NAT (TURN) Uniform Resource Identifiers) to Proposed Standard]

2009-10-20 Thread Marc Petit-Huguenin
Hi Ted, I was waiting for some feedback from Andy but let's continue the discussion. Ted Hardie wrote: > Hi Marc, > > Thanks for your quick reply; a few notes in-line below. > > >> Hmm, I see your point. Because I reuse definitions from RFC 3986, you think >> that these definitions should be

Re: [IAB] Call for Comments: "Peer-to-peer (P2P) Architectures"

2009-10-20 Thread Stanislav Shalunov
Gonzalo, I now see how my initial reading of the document was informed mainly by expectations set by the title and the abstract. I suspect that I might be alone in this. If the title and the abstract were to better reflect the content and to avoid what I read as overpromise, the documen

Re: Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-sasl-scram-10

2009-10-20 Thread Nicolas Williams
On Tue, Oct 20, 2009 at 09:30:47AM +0200, Simon Josefsson wrote: > That is the shortest gen-art review I have seen. Good work, SCRAM > authors! :-) Well, -07 had an earlier gen-art review, and that one wasn't quite as short... :) But still, overall fairly short. We've only worked on this for..

draft-ietf-geopriv-held-identity-extensions-00

2009-10-20 Thread Donald Eastlake
This is an early security directorate review at the request of the working group. This draft is of extensions to existing drafts. Those existing drafts permit a Device to request its location using HTTP based on the source IP address in the requesting packets and include security precautions based

Re: Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-sasl-scram-10

2009-10-20 Thread Ben Campbell
On Oct 20, 2009, at 2:30 AM, Simon Josefsson wrote: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a draft standard. Did you mean proposed standard? Uhm, yes, sorry. I guess after typing "draft" once in the sentence I got carried away. ___ I

Re: Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-sasl-scram-10

2009-10-20 Thread Simon Josefsson
Ben Campbell writes: > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) > reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd > or AD before posting a new