Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-14

2012-12-03 Thread Chuck Lever
in (see and ) for readability. [This is my same suggestion from the previous review. I won't mention it again, I promise. :-) ] Sorry we missed this before. I'll work with Martin to see that this is addressed. -- Chuck Lever chuck[dot]lever[at]oracle[dot]com

Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-13

2012-10-23 Thread Chuck Lever
defining ranges of allowed values in attributes. The use of square brackets denotes inclusivity. If you feel readers need more, or our use of this notation is inconsistent, I'm happy to add clarification. Kind regards, -Peter On 10/21/12 3:27 PM, Chuck Lever chuck.le

Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-13

2012-10-22 Thread Chuck Lever
paragraph (definition of FSL), 2nd sentence: fs_location - fs_locations. -- Chuck Lever chuck[dot]lever[at]oracle[dot]com