Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ospf-multi-area-adj-07

2008-03-20 Thread Ben Campbell
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ospf-

Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ospf-multi-area-adj-07

2008-03-20 Thread Adrian Farrel
If in doubt, expand acronyms. But see also http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt Thanks, Adrian > Abstract: > > Please expand OSPF on first use. > > Section 1.3, first paragraph: > > Please expand OSPF on first use. ___ IE

Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ospf-multi-area-adj-07

2008-03-22 Thread Acee Lindem
Hi Ben, I believe I've addressed your editorial comments and will send a draft copy to yourself and the other authors (not ietf.org). The updated version will also include Nischal Seth's comment regarding the wording inadvertently precluding OSPF point-to-point over LAN interfaces. With re

Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ospf-multi-area-adj-07

2008-03-25 Thread Ben Campbell
Hi everyone, For the record, Acee responded to my review off-list, and the preview of version 9 of this draft addresses all of my comments to my satisfaction. Thanks! Ben. On Mar 20, 2008, at 11:20 AM, Ben Campbell wrote: > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) > re

Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ospf-multi-area-adj-07

2008-03-25 Thread Ben Campbell
(Oops, sent from wrong account and ended up in moderation. Here it is again. Sorry for the duplicates.) Hi everyone, For the record, Acee responded to my review off-list, and the preview of version 9 of this draft addresses all of my comments to my satisfaction. Thanks! Ben. On Mar 20, 2