Gen-ART Review: Last Call

2011-08-10 Thread Mary Barnes
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-lisp-lig-04 Reviewer: Mary B

Re: Gen-ART Review: Last Call

2011-08-11 Thread Cullen Jennings
Thanks for the detailed review - you caught some good stuff. Most of this makes essence but we should probably talk about usage of 2119 language. On Aug 9, 2011, at 16:05 , Mary Barnes wrote: > simple > === > > Document: draft

Re: Gen-ART Review: Last Call

2011-08-11 Thread Scott O. Bradner
fwiw - the author of 2119 thinks that less is more when it comes to the use of these terms see, as Cullen points out, Section 6 but there is a balance - for example, if you define a structure and say that all fields are required, it is redundant to use MUST with each example of using the struct

Re: Gen-ART Review: Last Call

2011-08-15 Thread Mary Barnes
Someone might want to point this out to the IESG then, as that has not been my recent experience. Not even for structures or definition of elements - it was suggested that the use of the terms mandatory and optional (which I thought was quite precise when defining data elements) needed to be rewor