Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2008-11-12 Thread John C Klensin
--On Monday, 10 November, 2008 11:19 -0500 Russ Housley <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > John: > > In the previous note from me, I responded to you and Jari on > your main points. In this note, I am responding to your > editorial points. > >> Textual nit-picking >> >> * The second full paragraph

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2008-11-13 Thread SM
At 08:19 10-11-2008, Russ Housley wrote: To make them all parallel in structure, the first numbered item in section 3 becomes: "1. The IESG finds no conflict between this document and IETF work." In RFC 3932, these numbered items (except the first one, which is the same until the modification

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2008-11-13 Thread Russ Housley
To make them all parallel in structure, the first numbered item in section 3 becomes: "1. The IESG finds no conflict between this document and IETF work." In RFC 3932, these numbered items (except the first one, which is the same until the modification above) begin "The IESG thinks" During

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2008-11-13 Thread John C Klensin
Russ, FWIW, I can live with this formulation. I would still prefer to get rid of "harmful"... see below. --On Thursday, 13 November, 2008 12:41 -0500 Russ Housley <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > >>> To make them all parallel in structure, the first numbered >>> item in section 3 becomes: "1. The

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2008-11-13 Thread Russ Housley
John: I am pleased to go with: The IESG has concluded that publication could potentially disrupt the IETF work done in WG and recommends not publishing the document at this time. Thanks for the suggestions. Russ At 01:01 PM 11/13/2008, John C Klensin wrote: Russ, FWIW, I can live

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2008-11-16 Thread Jari Arkko
I am pleased to go with: The IESG has concluded that publication could potentially disrupt the IETF work done in WG and recommends not publishing the document at this time. I'm OK with this as well. Jari ___ Ietf mailing list Ietf@ietf.org https://

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2009-06-01 Thread Jari Arkko
I am bringing this draft to its second last call. After the completion of the headers and boilerplates document and extensive discussions within the IESG, it has become clear that several ADs had an issue with the 3932bis draft. I have asked Russ to post a new version which I believe resolves t

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2009-06-01 Thread Jari Arkko
And to start off the comments, I wanted tell my personal opinion about this. First, I have not been extremely happy with either the h&b or the 3932bis document, as some people who have been reading the various lists may gather. However, I think they were already good enough to be shipped befor

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2009-06-01 Thread Joel M. Halpern
The changes described in your other note (copied after your text to preserve context) are reasonable in the abstract. However, the devil is in the details. As I understand it, the reason for calling the extra note "exceptional" is that the IESG has in the past sometimes used that note to place

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2009-06-01 Thread Jari Arkko
Joel, However, the devil is in the details. As I understand it, the reason for calling the extra note "exceptional" is that the IESG has in the past sometimes used that note to place far more pejorative language than you suggest, in places that it really does not belong. That can turn a reaso

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2009-06-01 Thread John C Klensin
--On Monday, June 01, 2009 18:30 +0300 Jari Arkko wrote: > Joel, > >> However, the devil is in the details. >> As I understand it, the reason for calling the extra note >> "exceptional" is that the IESG has in the past sometimes used >> that note to place far more pejorative language than yo

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2009-06-01 Thread John C Klensin
--On Monday, June 01, 2009 17:47 +0300 Jari Arkko wrote: > I am bringing this draft to its second last call. After the > completion of the headers and boilerplates document and > extensive discussions within the IESG, it has become clear > that several ADs had an issue with the 3932bis draft. I

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2009-06-01 Thread Jari Arkko
John, The IAB and the RFC Editor have made updates to the formatting of the title page for all RFCs [N3]. With these changes, the upper left hand corner of the title page indicates the stream that produced the RFC. This label replaces some of the information that was previously provided in manda

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2009-06-01 Thread Russ Housley
The IAB and the RFC Editor have made updates to the formatting of the title page for all RFCs [N3]. With these changes, the upper left hand corner of the title page indicates the stream that produced the RFC. This label replaces some of the information that was previously provided in mandatory I

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2009-06-01 Thread John C Klensin
--On Monday, June 01, 2009 21:47 +0300 Jari Arkko wrote: >> As written, this violates provisions of RFC 4846 as well as >> some of the language in the current RFC Editor Model draft. >> The IESG may _request_ that notes or other language be added. > > Indeed -- thanks for catching this. It sho

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2009-06-02 Thread Olaf Kolkman
On 1 jun 2009, at 16:56, Jari Arkko wrote: I do think though that additional information at the level of "This RFC describes FOO. A standardized version of FOO can be found from RFC ." is useful. I think -07 version of the 3932bis is an improvement over the previous one, and should be

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2009-08-27 Thread Cullen Jennings
On Jun 2, 2009, at 8:03 , Olaf Kolkman wrote: RFC4846 section 5 uses the word "recommend" If the IESG, after completing its review, identifies issues, it may recommend explanatory or qualifying text for the RFC Editor to include in the document if it is published. Olaf, I believe this

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2009-08-27 Thread Russ Housley
RFC4846 section 5 uses the word "recommend" If the IESG, after completing its review, identifies issues, it may recommend explanatory or qualifying text for the RFC Editor to include in the document if it is published. Olaf, I believe this means in the contents of the document. I am unde

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2009-08-27 Thread Brian E Carpenter
On 2009-08-28 03:56, Russ Housley wrote: > >>> RFC4846 section 5 uses the word "recommend" >>> If the IESG, after completing its review, identifies issues, it may >>> recommend explanatory or qualifying text for the RFC Editor to >>> include in the document if it is published. >> >> Olaf, I

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2009-08-27 Thread Dave CROCKER
I am under the understanding the the IESG Note in RFC is provided by the IESG not by the RFC Editor. Is there a document that says otherwise? (I'm certainly open to the possibility that perhaps these documents should not have an IESG note but that seems a different issue) My understanding o

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2009-08-28 Thread Olaf Kolkman
On Aug 28, 2009, at 4:13 AM, Dave CROCKER wrote: I am under the understanding the the IESG Note in RFC is provided by the IESG not by the RFC Editor. Is there a document that says otherwise? (I'm certainly open to the possibility that perhaps these documents should not have an IESG no

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2008-10-21 Thread Brian E Carpenter
I'm happy with this version. I think it updates the procedures in accordance with what we've learned since RFC3932. Brian ___ Ietf mailing list Ietf@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2008-11-07 Thread John C Klensin
--On Tuesday, 21 October, 2008 08:02 -0700 The IESG <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > The IESG has received a request from an individual submitter > to consider the following document: > > - 'IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream >Submissions ' > as a BCP Russ, Harald

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2008-11-08 Thread SM
At 07:02 21-10-2008, The IESG wrote: The IESG has received a request from an individual submitter to consider the following document: - 'IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions ' as a BCP The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicit

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2008-11-10 Thread Jari Arkko
John, That was a long list of issues. Let me start off by saying that RFC 3932 is already a part of the daily procedures we operate on. Draft-housley was written to make an incremental improvement on it. This incremental improvement is the publication of the headers and boilerplates document,

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2008-11-10 Thread Russ Housley
John & Jari: Let me start off by saying that RFC 3932 is already a part of the daily procedures we operate on. Draft-housley was written to make an incremental improvement on it. This incremental improvement is the publication of the headers and boilerplates document, which allows us to simpl

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2008-11-10 Thread Jari Arkko
SM, Thanks for your review and thank you Russ for the edits. I'll just comment on the one remaining issue: "3. The IESG finds that publication is harmful to the IETF work done in WG and recommends not publishing the document at this time." I don't think that harmful is appropriate here. I g

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2008-11-10 Thread Russ Housley
John: In the previous note from me, I responded to you and Jari on your main points. In this note, I am responding to your editorial points. Textual nit-picking * The second full paragraph of the Introduction ("The IETF is responsible..."), second sentence, should read "..., and any other I

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2008-11-09 Thread Russ Housley
Thanks for your review. My responses below. The IESG has received a request from an individual submitter to consider the following document: - 'IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions ' as a BCP The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, an

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2008-11-10 Thread SM
Hi Russ, At 14:10 09-11-2008, Russ Housley wrote: Not all Informational and Experimental documents are standards-related. Some are. Not all Informational and Experimental documents are published as part of the IETF stream. Some are. I'm not sure what text change would help add clarity. I

Re: Last Call: draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis (IESG Procedures for Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions) to BCP

2008-11-10 Thread SM
Hi Jari, At 03:33 10-11-2008, Jari Arkko wrote: The issue is that mere conflict with work in a WG is not a sufficient reason to recommend against publishing. The IESG needs to make a judgment call that such publication would actually be harmful to the standardization process in the WG. For inst