Re: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials

2005-01-25 Thread Brian E Carpenter
Harald, I'm with you except perhaps for the data protection issue. Elwyn is right that laws in this area vary widely and if, for example, a subcontractor is located in the EU they will be much more constrained about use of personal data than in the US. I suggest adding something to the IAD's

Re: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials

2005-01-25 Thread Harald Tveit Alvestrand
--On 25. januar 2005 11:40 +0100 Brian E Carpenter [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: Harald, I'm with you except perhaps for the data protection issue. Elwyn is right that laws in this area vary widely and if, for example, a subcontractor is located in the EU they will be much more constrained about use

Re: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials

2005-01-25 Thread Brian E Carpenter
Harald Tveit Alvestrand wrote: --On 25. januar 2005 11:40 +0100 Brian E Carpenter [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: Harald, I'm with you except perhaps for the data protection issue. Elwyn is right that laws in this area vary widely and if, for example, a subcontractor is located in the EU they will be

Re: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials

2005-01-25 Thread Elwyn Davies
At 17:42 24/01/2005, Harald Tveit Alvestrand wrote: There has apparently been no comments on these I thought I'd make a pass... Some thoughts: S1, para 3: s/Such support includes/The support for current work includes/ this works either way for me - current seems to say the next sentences

Re: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials

2005-01-25 Thread Scott Bradner
Harald suggests The IAD shall ensure that personal data collected for legitimate purposes of the IASA are protected appropriately, and at least satisfactorily according to relevant legislation. Place it just after paragraph 5 of section 3.1, the one that starts out talking about

RE: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials

2005-01-25 Thread Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
Inline -Original Message- From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Behalf Of Harald Tveit Alvestrand Sent: Monday, January 24, 2005 18:42 To: ietf@ietf.org Subject: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials There has apparently been no comments on these I thought I'd

RE: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials

2005-01-25 Thread Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
Brian E Carpenter writes: Harald Tveit Alvestrand wrote: --On 25. januar 2005 11:40 +0100 Brian E Carpenter [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: Harald, I'm with you except perhaps for the data protection issue. Elwyn is right that laws in this area vary widely and if, for example, a