RE: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials

2005-01-25 Thread Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
> Brian E Carpenter writes: > > Harald Tveit Alvestrand wrote: > > > > > > --On 25. januar 2005 11:40 +0100 Brian E Carpenter <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > > wrote: > > > >> Harald, I'm with you except perhaps for the data protection > >> issue. Elwyn is right that laws in this area vary widely > >> a

RE: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials

2005-01-25 Thread Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
Inline > -Original Message- > From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Behalf Of > Harald Tveit Alvestrand > Sent: Monday, January 24, 2005 18:42 > To: ietf@ietf.org > Subject: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials > > > There has apparently been no comments on these I thought

Re: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials

2005-01-25 Thread Scott Bradner
Harald suggests > The IAD shall ensure that personal data collected for > legitimate purposes of the IASA are protected appropriately, > and at least satisfactorily according to relevant legislation. > > Place it just after paragraph 5 of section 3.1, the one that starts out > talking abou

Re: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials

2005-01-25 Thread Elwyn Davies
At 17:42 24/01/2005, Harald Tveit Alvestrand wrote: There has apparently been no comments on these I thought I'd make a pass... Some thoughts: S1, para 3: s/Such support includes/The support for current work includes/ this works either way for me - "current" seems to say "the next sentences

Re: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials

2005-01-25 Thread Brian E Carpenter
Harald Tveit Alvestrand wrote: --On 25. januar 2005 11:40 +0100 Brian E Carpenter <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: Harald, I'm with you except perhaps for the data protection issue. Elwyn is right that laws in this area vary widely and if, for example, a subcontractor is located in the EU they will be

Re: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials

2005-01-25 Thread Harald Tveit Alvestrand
--On 25. januar 2005 11:40 +0100 Brian E Carpenter <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: Harald, I'm with you except perhaps for the data protection issue. Elwyn is right that laws in this area vary widely and if, for example, a subcontractor is located in the EU they will be much more constrained about us

Re: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials

2005-01-25 Thread Brian E Carpenter
Harald, I'm with you except perhaps for the data protection issue. Elwyn is right that laws in this area vary widely and if, for example, a subcontractor is located in the EU they will be much more constrained about use of personal data than in the US. I suggest adding something to the IAD's respon