> Brian E Carpenter writes:
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> Harald Tveit Alvestrand wrote:
> >
> >
> > --On 25. januar 2005 11:40 +0100 Brian E Carpenter <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> > wrote:
> >
> >> Harald, I'm with you except perhaps for the data protection
> >> issue. Elwyn is right that laws in this area vary widely
> >> a
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> -Original Message-
> From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Behalf Of
> Harald Tveit Alvestrand
> Sent: Monday, January 24, 2005 18:42
> To: ietf@ietf.org
> Subject: Edits - #819 - Elwyn's editorials
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>
> There has apparently been no comments on these I thought
Harald suggests
> The IAD shall ensure that personal data collected for
> legitimate purposes of the IASA are protected appropriately,
> and at least satisfactorily according to relevant legislation.
>
> Place it just after paragraph 5 of section 3.1, the one that starts out
> talking abou
At 17:42 24/01/2005, Harald Tveit Alvestrand wrote:
There has apparently been no comments on these I thought I'd make a
pass...
Some thoughts:
S1, para 3: s/Such support includes/The support for current work includes/
this works either way for me - "current" seems to say "the next sentences
Harald Tveit Alvestrand wrote:
--On 25. januar 2005 11:40 +0100 Brian E Carpenter <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
wrote:
Harald, I'm with you except perhaps for the data protection
issue. Elwyn is right that laws in this area vary widely
and if, for example, a subcontractor is located in the EU
they will be
--On 25. januar 2005 11:40 +0100 Brian E Carpenter <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
wrote:
Harald, I'm with you except perhaps for the data protection
issue. Elwyn is right that laws in this area vary widely
and if, for example, a subcontractor is located in the EU
they will be much more constrained about us
Harald, I'm with you except perhaps for the data protection
issue. Elwyn is right that laws in this area vary widely
and if, for example, a subcontractor is located in the EU
they will be much more constrained about use of personal
data than in the US.
I suggest adding something to the IAD's respon