Review of draft-ietf-netconf-4741bis-07

2011-02-08 Thread Tina Tsou
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like a

Re: Review of draft-ietf-netconf-4741bis-07

2011-02-21 Thread Bert (IETF) Wijnen
Revision 9 is out and tried to address IETF LC comments Here is the diff between the rev you reviewed and the latest one: http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-netconf-4741bis-07&url2=draft-ietf-netconf-4741bis-09 Bert document shepherd On 2/8/11 3:05 AM, Tina Tsou wrote: I have rev

tsv-dir review of draft-ietf-netconf-4741bis-07

2011-02-04 Thread Rolf Winter
Hi, I've reviewed this document as part of the transport area directorate's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors for their information and to allow them to address any issues