I believe this revision resolve the comments from the IEEE 802.1 WG in
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-area/mMDG3O8uzezg6I3x_Ee7atuhU0k/
The Shepherd's Write-Up might need some minor tweaks but other than that I
believe this document is ready for publication request.
Thanks,
Donald
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Internet Area Working
Group (INTAREA) WG of the IETF.
Title : IANA Considerations and IETF Protocol and Documentation
Usage for IEEE 802 Parameters
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