Re: [IPsec] Issue #157: Illustrate the SA payload with a diagram

2010-02-07 Thread Paul Hoffman
Tero's proposed tree structure would not fit in an RFC without trimming even more, making it even less readable. I have used Alfred's proposed layout, but I changed the example to match it. Please: read the example and make sure that the illustration is correct: For example, one such

[IPsec] More Issues for IKEv2bis

2010-02-07 Thread Yoav Nir
Hi. Another week, another 5 issues to discuss. Issue #159 - Payload processing order within messages = (3.1) Clarify that the text: Payloads are processed in the order in which they appear in an IKE message by invoking

[IPsec] Issue #161, was: RE: More Issues for IKEv2bis

2010-02-07 Thread Yaron Sheffer
Issue #161 should have referred to 2.21.2, not to 2.21. But reading the text again, I am happy with the way it's worded in -07. Thanks, Yaron -Original Message- From: ipsec-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:ipsec-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Yoav Nir Sent: Monday, February 08, 2010