[IPsec] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc8229bis-06

2022-05-21 Thread Joseph Touch via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joseph Touch Review result: Ready with Issues This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG

[IPsec] Tsvart early review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-12

2021-12-07 Thread Joseph Touch via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joseph Touch Review result: Ready The current version has addressed my previous comments. ___ IPsec mailing list IPsec@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec

[IPsec] Tsvart early review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-03

2020-12-03 Thread Joseph Touch via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joseph Touch Review result: Not Ready This documents most significant transport issue is the use of path MTU discovery. Sec 2 recommends the use of path MTU discovery [RFC1191] [RFC8201], but this is known to be problematic black holing where ICMPs are blocked or filtered (which should