Re: [IPsec] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc8229bis-06

2022-05-23 Thread Valery Smyslov
Hi Joseph, thank for your review, much appreciated. More inline. > Reviewer: Joseph Touch > Review result: Ready with Issues > > This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's > ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written > primarily for

[IPsec] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc8229bis-06

2022-05-21 Thread Joseph Touch via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joseph Touch Review result: Ready with Issues This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG