Warren Kumari has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ipsecme-labeled-ipsec-11: Yes
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipsecme-labeled-ipsec/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you for this document - I had a few minor nits and suggestions. Feel free to address, or not (they are just editorial suggestions). 1: "For example a Traffic Selector of TS_TYPE TS_IPV4_ADDR_RANGE for UDP traffic in the IP network 198.51.100.0/24 covering all ports, is denoted as (17, 0, 198.51.100.0-198.51.100.255)" As this is an introductory example, I think it would be helpful to explain where the numbers (17, 0) come from -- e.g "For example a Traffic Selector of TS_TYPE TS_IPV4_ADDR_RANGE for UDP (IP protocol 17) traffic in ..." or similar. Huh. It turns out that I only had one nit/suggestion, so s/had a few minor nits and suggestions/a suggestion/ :-P _______________________________________________ IPsec mailing list IPsec@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec
