-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 Hi Roman
Thanks for catching the bugs. I'll have it fixed before the weekend. >> Such prefixes are defined in [RFC4291] and [RFC5214] at the time of > ^^^^^^^^^ > RFC 5214 (ISATAP) doesn't define a well-known prefix. Did you mean RFC > 2765/draft-ietf-behave-address-format? RFC2765, which will probably be obsoleted by the dehave draft. Regards, Seiichi Роман Донченко wrote: > Seiichi Kawamura <kawamu...@mesh.ad.jp> писал в своём письме Wed, 17 Feb > 2010 05:50:58 +0300: > >> Hi >> >> I have uploaded the new version of the draft. >> I hope this addresses the issues that were raised. >> >> I have removed the Conclusion part since >> Section 4 is now clear and concise. >> Thank you Ron, for providing good text in IESG COMMENT. >> >> Regards, >> Seiichi >> > > I like how Section 5 looks now, except for a few bits. > >> Such prefixes are defined in [RFC4291] and [RFC5214] at the time of > ^^^^^^^^^ > RFC 5214 (ISATAP) doesn't define a well-known prefix. Did you mean RFC > 2765/draft-ietf-behave-address-format? > >> writing. If it is known by some external method that a given prefix > ^^^^^^ >> includes an IPv4 address, it MAY be represented as mixed notation. > > I suggest to rephrase that as "... that a given address embeds an IPv4 > address, ...", since prefixes themselves don't contain addresses. > > And I'd like to repeat my previous suggestion of placing an example of > mixed notation in Section 1, so that is covers all syntactical features. > > Roman. > > -------------------------------------------------------------------- > IETF IPv6 working group mailing list > ipv6@ietf.org > Administrative Requests: https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipv6 > -------------------------------------------------------------------- -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.9 (MingW32) iEYEARECAAYFAkt8/N4ACgkQcrhTYfxyMkLMhACfW24eLoFH2slZd34mJrvR7N/G PMQAnRCMcYYLwfi4ba0nIaQAaI67bKKW =mvds -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- -------------------------------------------------------------------- IETF IPv6 working group mailing list ipv6@ietf.org Administrative Requests: https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipv6 --------------------------------------------------------------------
