showuon commented on a change in pull request #10591:
URL: https://github.com/apache/kafka/pull/10591#discussion_r620956779



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File path: docs/ops.html
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@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ <h4 class="anchor-heading"><a id="basic_ops_leader_balancing" 
class="anchor-link
 
   <pre class="line-numbers"><code class="language-text">      
auto.leader.rebalance.enable=true</code></pre>
     You can also set this to false, but you will then need to manually restore 
leadership to the restored replicas by running the command:
-  <pre class="line-numbers"><code class="language-bash">  &gt; 
bin/kafka-preferred-replica-election.sh --bootstrap-server 
broker_host:port</code></pre>
+  <pre class="line-numbers"><code class="language-bash">  &gt; 
bin/kafka-leader-election.sh --bootstrap-server broker_host:port</code></pre>

Review comment:
       The paragraph is talking about `preferred replicas` update, why do we 
need to change to use `kafka-leader-election.sh`? 

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File path: docs/security.html
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@@ -319,7 +319,7 @@ <h5>SSL key and certificates in PEM format</h5>
             We need to configure the following property in server.properties, 
which must have one or more comma-separated values:
             <pre>listeners</code></pre>
 
-            If SSL is not enabled for inter-broker communication (see below 
for how to enable it), both PLAINTEXT and SSL ports will be necessary.
+            If SSL is enabled for inter-broker communication (see below for 
how to enable it), both PLAINTEXT and SSL ports will be necessary.

Review comment:
       I think the section is saying:
   > If SSL is not enabled, we need to set both  PLAINTEXT and SSL ports, but 
if SSL is enabled, we only need SSL ports. 
   
   What do you think?

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File path: docs/upgrade.html
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@@ -420,11 +420,11 @@ <h4><a id="upgrade_2_4_0" href="#upgrade_2_4_0">Upgrading 
from 0.8.x, 0.9.x, 0.1
         if there are no snapshot files in 3.4 data directory. For more details 
about the workaround please refer to <a 
href="https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/ZOOKEEPER/Upgrade+FAQ";>ZooKeeper
 Upgrade FAQ</a>.
     </li>
     <li>
-        An embedded Jetty based <a 
href="http://zookeeper.apache.org/doc/r3.5.6/zookeeperAdmin.html#sc_adminserver";>AdminServer</a>
 added in ZooKeeper 3.5.
+        An embedded Jetty based <a 
href="http://zookeeper.apache.org/doc/r3.5.7/zookeeperAdmin.html#sc_adminserver";>AdminServer</a>
 added in ZooKeeper 3.5.

Review comment:
       Actually, we're using zookeeper 3.5.9. Please help update it here and 
below. Thanks.

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File path: docs/upgrade.html
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@@ -337,8 +337,8 @@ <h5 class="anchor-heading"><a id="upgrade_250_notable" 
class="anchor-link"></a><
         <a 
href="https://github.com/apache/kafka/tree/2.5/examples";>examples</a> folder. 
Check out
         <a 
href="https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/KAFKA/KIP-447%3A+Producer+scalability+for+exactly+once+semantics";>KIP-447</a>
         for the full details.</li>
-    <li>Added a new public api <code>KafkaStreams.queryMetadataForKey(String, 
K, Serializer) to get detailed information on the key being queried.
-        It provides information about the partition number where the key 
resides in addition to hosts containing the active and standby partitions for 
the key.</code></li>
+    <li>Added a new public api <code>KafkaStreams.queryMetadataForKey(String, 
K, Serializer)</code> to get detailed information on the key being queried.

Review comment:
       nice catch!

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File path: docs/toc.html
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@@ -79,11 +79,15 @@
                         <li><a href="#basic_ops_modify_topic">Modifying 
topics</a>
                         <li><a href="#basic_ops_restarting">Graceful 
shutdown</a>
                         <li><a href="#basic_ops_leader_balancing">Balancing 
leadership</a>
-                        <li><a href="#basic_ops_consumer_lag">Checking 
consumer position</a>
+                        <li><a href="#basic_ops_racks">Balancing Replicas 
Across Racks</a>
                         <li><a href="#basic_ops_mirror_maker">Mirroring data 
between clusters</a>
+                        <li><a href="#basic_ops_consumer_lag">Checking 
consumer position</a>
+                        <li><a href="#basic_ops_consumer_group">Managing 
Consumer Groups</a>

Review comment:
       Nice improvement to add missing TOC!

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File path: docs/upgrade.html
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@@ -136,8 +136,8 @@ <h5><a id="upgrade_270_notable" 
href="#upgrade_270_notable">Notable changes in 2
         The 2.7.0 release includes the core Raft implementation specified in
         <a 
href="https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/KAFKA/KIP-595%3A+A+Raft+Protocol+for+the+Metadata+Quorum";>KIP-595</a>.
         There is a separate "raft" module containing most of the logic. Until 
integration with the
-        controller is complete, there is a standalone server that users can 
use for testing the p
-        erformance of the Raft implementation.  See the README.md in the raft 
module for details

Review comment:
       Nice catch!




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