Re: [Lsr] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection-10

2022-10-22 Thread Salz, Rich
Tony, I believe those changes will address my comments. If I don’t get around to updating my review, please accept this email as “proof” :) From: Antoni Przygienda Date: Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 5:45 AM To: Rich Salz , "sec...@ietf.org" Cc: "draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection@ietf.

[Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection-11.txt

2022-10-22 Thread internet-drafts
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Link State Routing WG of the IETF. Title : IS-IS Flood Reflection Authors : Tony Przygienda Chris Bowers

Re: [Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection-10

2022-10-22 Thread Antoni Przygienda
Roni, thanks for your comments 1. We traditionally do not specify length, one reason being that TLV format allows sub-TLVs and hence the length encompasses those as well 2. Clarified the case a bit and added the coma * Tony From: Roni Even via Datatracker Date: Friday, 7 October 20

Re: [Lsr] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection-10

2022-10-22 Thread Antoni Przygienda
Rich, thanks for comments 1. I will explain in glossary quickly that L1 and L2 pertains to ISIS concepts 2. Paragraph moved before figure 3. Paragraph 1 and 2 talk about different tunnel types hence I kept it separate. I pointed out the tunnel type. * Tony From: Rich Salz via Da