Re: [Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8919bis-01

2023-05-09 Thread Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
Robert/John - I have posted a new version which addresses this issue. I hope this clears the discussion. I also (as promised) made the same change to https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8920bis/ and posted a new version of that document. Les > -Original Message- > F

Re: [Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8919bis-01

2023-05-03 Thread Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
John - The solution you propose is fine with me. I will update it in the next version. As we are still waiting for a few reviews I will wait a bit in case other changes are needed. I will do the same to https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8920bis/ as well. Les > -Origina

Re: [Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8919bis-01

2023-05-03 Thread Robert Sparks
On 5/3/23 1:12 PM, John Scudder wrote: On May 3, 2023, at 11:04 AM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote: 2) Please reconsider the link to the mailarchive in the RFC. Put it in the shepherd writeup or in the history in the datatracker as a comment (chairs can do this). Otherwise it adds to the list

Re: [Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8919bis-01

2023-05-03 Thread John Scudder
> On May 3, 2023, at 11:04 AM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) > wrote: > >> 2) Please reconsider the link to the mailarchive in the RFC. Put it in the >> shepherd writeup or in the history in the datatracker as a comment (chairs >> can >> do this). Otherwise it adds to the list of URLs that we have to

Re: [Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8919bis-01

2023-05-03 Thread Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
Robert - Thanx for your review - apologies for the delay in responding. Please see inline. > -Original Message- > From: Robert Sparks via Datatracker > Sent: Thursday, April 27, 2023 1:09 PM > To: gen-...@ietf.org > Cc: draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8919bis@ietf.org; last-c...@ietf.org; lsr@ietf

[Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8919bis-01

2023-04-27 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more