Tony,
I believe those changes will address my comments. If I don’t get around to
updating my review, please accept this email as “proof” :)
From: Antoni Przygienda
Date: Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 5:45 AM
To: Rich Salz , "sec...@ietf.org"
Cc: "draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection@ietf.
Rich, thanks for comments
1. I will explain in glossary quickly that L1 and L2 pertains to ISIS
concepts
2. Paragraph moved before figure
3. Paragraph 1 and 2 talk about different tunnel types hence I kept it
separate. I pointed out the tunnel type.
* Tony
From: Rich Salz via Da
Thanks for the review, Rich. One tiny nit, mostly for the authors:
> On Oct 3, 2022, at 12:23 PM, Rich Salz via Datatracker
> wrote:
>
> s/could be in most extreme case/could be in THE most extreme case/
Please don’t put “the” in all caps when you do the edit. Even though there’s no
formal re
Reviewer: Rich Salz
Review result: Has Nits
I am a routing naïf and do not have a lot of time these days. I hope this
review is still useful, anyway.
The glossary was very helpful. I still don't have a clear understanding of L1
and L2.
The picture is a tour de force. The description "Figure 1
