Hi Edward
Thanks for reading through it! Brilliant feedback, and you're so right
- I do have trouble with the characters, especially the brothers, and
Richard does mostly disappear half way through (I hadnt spotted
that!). Also the family/ parents as well, maybe I should bring them
back somehow!
Dave -
It's a bit far-fetched. The aluminium in aluminium pans is released by
cooking highly acidic food in them - the example always quoted is
boiling rhubarb. I don't think boiling or frying potatoes or a
potato-and-flour dough would do the trick. That's leaving on one side
the question of h
