Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-wwx-netmod-event-yang-04.txt

2019-11-01 Thread Qin Wu
v-04 is posted to address chairs' comments, https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-wwx-netmod-event-yang-04 the main changes include: o Add text in introduction section to clarify the usage examples of ECA policy o Update objective section to align with use cases. o Clarify

Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-05.txt

2019-11-01 Thread Andy Bierman
Hi, I have read draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-05 and have the following comments: * sec 2. Specifying factory-reset content This section uses SHALL (equivalent to MUST) to declare the implementation details for the server to load the factory-default content. This is not appropriate for a se

Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-05.txt

2019-11-01 Thread Joe Clarke (jclarke)
On Nov 1, 2019, at 11:21, Kent Watsen mailto:kent+i...@watsen.net>> wrote: This begins a two-week Working Group Last Call (WGLC) on draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-05. The WGLC ends on Nov 15 (two days before the NETMOD 106 session). Please send your comments to the working group mailin

Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-05.txt

2019-11-01 Thread Kent Watsen
I have reviewed -05 and support it so long as the following comments are considered: Kent // contributor review Section 1 is missing a NMDA-compliance statement, per https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc8407#section-3.5. Section 2 says: Factory-default content SHALL be specified

Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-05.txt

2019-11-01 Thread Kent Watsen
This begins a two-week Working Group Last Call (WGLC) on draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-05. The WGLC ends on Nov 15 (two days before the NETMOD 106 session). Please send your comments to the working group mailing list. Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it i

[netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7407 (5886)

2019-11-01 Thread RFC Errata System
The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7407, "A YANG Data Model for SNMP Configuration". -- You may review the report below and at: https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5886 -- Type: Technical Reported by: Mart