Re: [netmod] WG Last Call on draft-ietf-core-sid-21

2023-09-07 Thread Andy Bierman
Hi, I do not have time to do another full review of this draft. These are high-level comments. ## document scope is too large The draft should be split into 2 or 3 drafts. 1) SID File Definition 2a) SID Management Procedures 2b) Initial SID File Definitions ## document scope is not

Re: [netmod] [core] WG Last Call on draft-ietf-core-comi-16

2023-09-07 Thread Andy Bierman
Hi, I have some minor comments about this draft. I did not find any major issues. It is almost ready for publication. Andy # comments on draft-ietf-core-comi-16 ## sec 2.3 Examples of each media type would be helpful here ## sec 2.4 It is not clear how any interoperability would be