Re: [netmod] AD review of draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities

2021-07-05 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Benoit, Thanks for accommodating my suggestions. All resolutions look good to me. I have a preference to hold shipping this document to IETF LC until the instance-data doc is also ready. I think that it will help the IESG review if they have both documents available to review at the same t

Re: [netmod] AD review of draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities

2021-07-05 Thread Benoit Claise
Hi Rob, Thanks for your detailed review. A new draft version has been posted. URL:https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities-17.txt Status:https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities/ Htmlized:https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/ht

[netmod] AD review of draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities

2021-06-21 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi, Here is my AD review of draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabiltiies-16 Thanks for this draft, sorry for the delay in reviewing. It looks like it is in good shape. I think that most of my comments are minor or cosmetic suggestions to potentially improve the phrasing of the text. 1. Abst