Re: [OAUTH-WG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-oauth-introspection-04.txt

2014-12-24 Thread Richer, Justin P.
Thanks for the review, especially of the new text. The "Following is a non-normative example" text is, in all cases, actually a preamble attached to the diagram/example section. In the plain text it renders as a separate paragraph, which is why it might look odd there. I've removed the line wra

Re: [OAUTH-WG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-oauth-introspection-04.txt

2014-12-24 Thread Thomas Broyer
Hi, A couple editorial remarks: When introducing the first 2 examples, maybe merge the two paragraphs, starting with "The following non-normative example shows …". Similarly, you talk about line wraps for display purpose but the examples don't need/use wrapping. Other than that, ready to go to