[OPSAWG] WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-11

2017-09-20 Thread Joe Clarke
While this draft was already put through WGLC in March, there have been a number of changes to it that should be reviewed. This document has had early reviews by SEC-DIR, IOT-DIR, and GEN. The chairs are particularly looking for a review of those items that have changed since the -05 review (thes

[OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-service-model-explained-03

2017-09-20 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more informati

Re: [OPSAWG] Associating a MUD profile with a specific device

2017-09-20 Thread M. Ranganathan
Hi Eliot, I am definitely interested in a MUD controller RFC and would be glad to help in its defintion. It would be nice to see some clear definition on how to interact with a MUD controller - i.e. a YANG model such as this one would make sense to include. Another item to consider in such an RFC

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-11.txt

2017-09-20 Thread Eliot Lear
This one corrects the examples.  mudmaker.org has been updated as well. Eliot On 9/20/17 4:11 PM, internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote: > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group

[OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-11.txt

2017-09-20 Thread internet-drafts
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group WG of the IETF. Title : Manufacturer Usage Description Specification Authors : Eliot Lear

Re: [OPSAWG] Fwd: AD Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-service-model-explained

2017-09-20 Thread Adrian Farrel
Hey Benoit, Thanks for the review. > Figure 3: Network configuration model is a brand new term that is only > mentioned > in the figure, and not explained. OMG! That is a good catch. > In the same figure, could the "Device Configuration Model" be renamed to RFC > 8199 > "Network Element

Re: [OPSAWG] Associating a MUD profile with a specific device

2017-09-20 Thread Eliot Lear
Hi Ranga, I think this makes sense for a MUD controller YANG model, but doesn't do well in a MUD file itself.  We stop short of that in the document, for fear of boiling the ocean, but I would happily do some follow-up work with you that would include this, if you're interested.  The model *is* st