Hi Adrian,
Thanks for the review. I will update the document using your proposals
BR
Roni
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From: Adrian Farrel [mailto:adr...@olddog.co.uk]
Sent: Tuesday, March 05, 2019 11:23 AM
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Hi authors,
I see you posted -02 and so I have given it a quick review. I spent my time
on the early sections because those are the ones that introduce the ideas to
the new reader.
Feel free to discuss, although the changes are basically editorial.
Best,
Adrian
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