Re: [OPSAWG] Review of draft-evenwu-opsawg-yang-composed-vpn-02

2019-03-05 Thread Roni Even (A)
Hi Adrian, Thanks for the review. I will update the document using your proposals BR Roni -Original Message- From: Adrian Farrel [mailto:adr...@olddog.co.uk] Sent: Tuesday, March 05, 2019 11:23 AM To: draft-evenwu-opsawg-yang-composed-...@ietf.org Cc: opsawg@ietf.org Subject: Review of

[OPSAWG] Review of draft-evenwu-opsawg-yang-composed-vpn-02

2019-03-05 Thread Adrian Farrel
Hi authors, I see you posted -02 and so I have given it a quick review. I spent my time on the early sections because those are the ones that introduce the ideas to the new reader. Feel free to discuss, although the changes are basically editorial. Best, Adrian === Abstract OLD This