Based on the comments received during the Last Call process, I:
- Updated the boilerplate text for the reference to BCP14
- Clarified the 5th paragraph of the definition of SnmpTLSAddress, and
- and updated the revision notes of the MODULE-IDENTIFY macro to reflect the
above tweak.
I believe
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group
WG of the IETF.
Title : Updates to the TLS Transport Model for SNMP
Author : Kenneth Vaughn
Hi,
Here are my AD review comments for draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-09,
apologies for the delay.
I think that this document is in good shape and hence most of my comments are
only minor or nits.
Minor level comments:
(1) p 0, sec
The data model for network topologies defined
