Re: [OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-17 Thread Alan DeKok
On Feb 17, 2023, at 3:29 PM, Robert Sparks via Datatracker wrote: > Nit: The discussion in paragraph 3 of section 3 and the note that follows are > currently ambiguous. When it calls out that 2865 limits the size of DHCP > options and that 7499 and 7930 relaxes the limit, is it only trying to

[OPSAWG] [IANA #1266742] expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns (dhcpv6-parameters)

2023-02-17 Thread David Dong via RT
Dear Bernie Volz and Tomek Mrugalski (cc: opsawg WG), As the designated experts for the RADIUS Attributes Permitted in DHCPv6 RADIUS Option registry, can you review the proposed registration in draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns for us? Please see:

[OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-17 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [OPSAWG] Review of draft-ma-opsawg-ucl-acl

2023-02-17 Thread Joe Clarke (jclarke)
Sorry for late follow up. Thank you very much for the valuable comments, they have been incorporated into the -01 version (https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ma-opsawg-ucl-acl-01.txt). And the steps have also been updated as you proposed accordingly. [JMC] Thanks. As stated, this flow

Re: [OPSAWG] New Version Notification for draft-wzwb-opsawg-network-inventory-management-01.txt

2023-02-17 Thread Marisol Palmero Amador (mpalmero)
Hi Bo, Could you please elaborate on your note? >From your email: Regarding licenses (or entitlements in draft-palmero-opsawg-dmlmo-09), some licenses may affect the functions of physical components or software components, though having removed from the current model, but we feel further