Re: [OPSAWG] [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thank you for the careful review and good suggestions. Went with almost all of them. Please see inline for more context. Cheers, Med De : ipv6 De la part de Aitken, Paul Envoyé : lundi 22 janvier 2024 22:50 À : Joe Clarke (jclarke) ; opsawg@ietf.org Cc : t...@ietf.org; ts...@ietf.org

Re: [OPSAWG] draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-08 shepherd review

2024-01-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Thomas, Thank you much for preparing the writeup. I'm not sure I received the comments mentioned in point 14 of the writeup, though. I suspect this is because of the issues I'm having with the IETF aliases. Please forward me offline these comments. Thanks and apologies for the inconvenie

Re: [OPSAWG] [**EXTERNAL**] RE: [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-23 Thread Aitken, Paul
Med, The following drawing indicates the position of each bit in the encoding of the Information Element. No, not any more - so this should be removed. [Med] It is useful as it indicates the bit position that is then referred to in the new IANA registry. Updated the figure to

Re: [OPSAWG] [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thank you very much for the detailed review. There are some points that are common to the udp spec. Will discuss those in separate threads. Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : tsvwg De la part de Aitken, Paul Envoyé : vendredi 19 janvier 2024 10:52 À : Joe Clarke (jclarke) ; opsawg@

[OPSAWG] errata eid7775 RE: [**EXTERNAL**] RE: [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Re-, Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : Aitken, Paul Envoyé : mardi 23 janvier 2024 11:26 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; Joe Clarke (jclarke) ; opsawg@ietf.org Cc : t...@ietf.org; ts...@ietf.org; 6...@ietf.org; ip...@ietf.org Objet : Re: [**EXTERNAL**] RE: [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents M

[OPSAWG] Bitfields vs. Unsigned RE: Re: [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, > It is consistent but wrong, as the numeric value of these fields is > meaningless. Bitfields with flags semantics don't have a meaningful > "unsigned" value. You raised this comment for both TCP/UDP specs. As I mentioned in the previous message, all existing IEs of type flags are u

[OPSAWG] octetArray/hextetArray/32tetArray RE: Re: [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, (restricted the distribution lists to OPSAWG and IPFIX) The octetArray type is especially confusing as these are really hextetArrays. [Med] Not sure we need a new data type here as octeArray is defined as follows: The octetArray data type has no encoding rules; it represents a raw

[OPSAWG] deprecating ipv6ExtensionHeaders and tcpOptions IEs RE: [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Re-, Paul suggested to tag these two IEs as deprecated in favor of the new full IEs. I do personally think this is OK (especially given what Andrew reported at: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/QNm9p8V2vKuhUX5rxBCqcxD-WAY/), but would like to hear if there objections to proceed with

[OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-05.txt

2024-01-23 Thread internet-drafts
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-05.txt is now available. It is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. Title: TACACS+ TLS 1.3 Authors: Thorsten Dahm Douglas Gash Andrej Ota John Heasley Na

[OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes-05.txt

2024-01-23 Thread internet-drafts
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes-05.txt is now available. It is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. Title: Simple Fixes to the IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) IANA Registry Authors: Mohamed Boucadair Benoit Cla

[OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-07.txt

2024-01-23 Thread internet-drafts
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-07.txt is now available. It is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. Title: Export of UDP Options Information in IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) Authors: Mohamed Boucadair Ti

[OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-09.txt

2024-01-23 Thread internet-drafts
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-09.txt is now available. It is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. Title: Extended TCP Options and IPv6 Extension Headers IPFIX Information Elements Authors: Mohamed Boucadair

Re: [OPSAWG] [**EXTERNAL**] RE: [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-23 Thread Aitken, Paul
Med, Why does the document identify issues without proposing solutions to them all? How and when will those other issues be fixed? [Med] The new IEs in this I-D fix all the issues. Then please don't write "some of". MSB LSB 0

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-tls-12

2024-01-23 Thread Paul Wouters
On Tue, Jan 23, 2024 at 1:20 AM tirumal reddy wrote: > Hi Paul, > > Thanks for the review. Please see inline > > On Sat, 20 Jan 2024 at 03:55, Paul Wouters wrote: > >> Hi, >> >> I am assisting Rob Wilton with some documents, as so I am the (temporary) >> responsible AD for draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-

Re: [OPSAWG] draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-08 shepherd review

2024-01-23 Thread Thomas.Graf
Dear Med, That was a mistake by me. The idnits showed nothing. All clear. Will update the shepherd review in the next iteration. Bets wishes Thomas -Original Message- From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com Sent: Tuesday, January 23, 2024 11:02 AM To: Graf Thomas, INI-NET-VNC-HCS ; draft-

[OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-tls-13.txt

2024-01-23 Thread internet-drafts
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-tls-13.txt is now available. It is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. Title: Manufacturer Usage Description (MUD) (D)TLS Profiles for IoT Devices Authors: Tirumaleswar Reddy Dan Wing

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-tls-13.txt

2024-01-23 Thread tirumal reddy
This revision https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-tls-13 addresses comments from Paul Wouters (AD). -Tiru On Wed, 24 Jan 2024 at 11:05, wrote: > Internet-Draft draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-tls-13.txt is now available. It is a > work > item of the Operations and Management Area