Re: [OPSAWG]  WG Adoption Call for draft-feng-opsawg-incident-management-04

2024-02-12 Thread Alex Huang Feng
Dear OPSAWG, I support the progress of this document. I only have a comment. Since the creation of the new NMOP WG, I wonder if this draft should be discussed in that WG too. There is “incident management” in the charter. Some of the related work such as

Re: [OPSAWG]  WG Adoption Call for draft-feng-opsawg-incident-management-04

2024-02-12 Thread Andrew L
I support to adopt this document as WG draft. I also checked the grammar of the YANG model, it is perfect, but the tree diagram is a bit inconsistent with the YANG model. so I ran the pyang 2.6 on the YANG model, the tree diagram is as follows for your reference: module: ietf-incident +--ro

Re: [OPSAWG]  WG Adoption Call for draft-feng-opsawg-incident-management-04

2024-02-12 Thread Aihua Guo
This document addresses the O aspect of network services. I support the adoption of this draft. Aihua On Thu, Feb 8, 2024 at 10:44 AM Henk Birkholz wrote: > Dear OPSAWG members, > > this email starts a call for Working Group Adoption of > > > >

Re: [OPSAWG]  WG Adoption Call for draft-feng-opsawg-incident-management-04

2024-02-12 Thread Italo Busi
I support the adoption of this document Italo > -Original Message- > From: Henk Birkholz > Sent: giovedì 8 febbraio 2024 16:44 > To: OPSAWG > Subject: [OPSAWG]  WG Adoption Call for draft-feng-opsawg-incident- > management-04 > > Dear OPSAWG members, > > this email starts a call for

[OPSAWG] Last Call: (Operational Considerations for use of DNS in IoT devices) to Best Current Practice

2024-02-12 Thread The IESG
The IESG has received a request from the Operations and Management Area Working Group WG (opsawg) to consider the following document: - 'Operational Considerations for use of DNS in IoT devices' as Best Current Practice The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits

[OPSAWG] Last Call: (Authorized update to MUD URLs) to Proposed Standard

2024-02-12 Thread The IESG
The IESG has received a request from the Operations and Management Area Working Group WG (opsawg) to consider the following document: - 'Authorized update to MUD URLs' as Proposed Standard The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final comments on this action.

[OPSAWG] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-10: (with COMMENT)

2024-02-12 Thread Éric Vyncke via Datatracker
Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-10: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-08

2024-02-12 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Michael, The TD;LR is I think that your latest changes are good and I’ll send -12 to IETF LC. When checking the changes, diff, 3 minor nits: 1. “a IP address literal in the URL” to “an IP … 1. I still think “inprotocol” should be something else, perhaps “within the protocol”.

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-acceptable-urls-09

2024-02-12 Thread Michael Richardson
I had to go full on gmail/html to actually see what your comments were. Readers in the archive might be lost, and I hope my reply highlights all of your comments. Rob Wilton (rwilton) wrote: >> Perhaps change: This is contrasted with ... => This contrasts this >> with an alternative

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-acceptable-urls-09

2024-02-12 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Michael, Thanks for the updates. Changes look good, and I’ll initiated IETF LC on -09, but there are a couple of remaining nits, please see inline. below. You can either just fix them in your editors copy or post a new revision if you prefer, either works. Anyway, this completes my AD