Re: [OPSAWG] SAPs and Attachment Circuits Provisioning (was TR: I-D Action: draft-boro-opsawg-ntw-attachment-circuit-01.txt)

2023-03-06 Thread Moti Morgenstern
Hi, Here are my comments so far: Introduction ("the same attachment circuit may be used to host multiple services") - The hierarchy is unclear. So far I knew that in a simple use-case we have a bearer channel that can carry one or several ACs and the traffic over each of them is delimited by s

Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm

2021-11-22 Thread Moti Morgenstern
Hi Med, For esi-redundancy-mode leaf/parameter, the Description refers to "EVPN redundancy mode" instead of "ES redundancy mode". Regards, Moti -Original Message- From: OPSAWG On Behalf Of mohamed.boucad...@orange.com Sent: Monday, November 22, 2021 12:14 PM To: adr...@olddog.co.uk; dr

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-11.txt

2021-11-16 Thread Moti Morgenstern
Hi all, Few comments to -11: 1) evpn-redundancy-mode in "ietf-ethernet-segment" YANG module should actually be called es-redundancy-mode, because it consists of modes "... for a given ES" 2) evpn-service-type should be removed from "ietf-ethernet-segment" YANG module because it is unused there.

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-08.txt

2021-10-11 Thread Moti Morgenstern
Hi, With respect to the newly added 'units' clause for parameters in the Service Bandwidth Subtree: CIR, EIR and PIR are measured in bits-per-second (bps). However, CBS, EBS and PBS do not express rate (so they are not 'per second'). They define the buffer-size available for temporarily exceed

Re: [OPSAWG] [EXTERNAL] Externalize some data nodes for better flexibilty (RE: [Last-Call] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-07)

2021-10-05 Thread Moti Morgenstern
Hi, I think it's OK to manage the ES object via a separate module. It is very same approach as in https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-yang-07 (which expired two years ago). Regards, Moti -Original Message- From: OPSAWG On Behalf Of mohamed.boucad...@orange.com

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-07.txt

2021-10-03 Thread Moti Morgenstern
Hi all, Typos I noticed in revision -07: * Caption of Figure 34 - correct the word "Auto-Assignement" * Last paragraph of 6.6.2.1 - correct the word "Nighbour" to "Neighbor" * Chapter 6.7 'global-parameters-profile' - correct "overriden" to "overridden" * Just before Figur

Re: [OPSAWG] IPR Poll: draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm

2021-09-16 Thread Moti Morgenstern
Dear WG chairs, I am not aware of any IPR that applies to draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm. Regards, Moti Morgenstern -Original Message- From: OPSAWG On Behalf Of Joe Clarke (jclarke) Sent: Thursday, September 16, 2021 7:03 PM To: opsawg@ietf.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] [OPSAWG] IPR Poll: draft-ietf

[OPSAWG] A typo in draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-03.txt

2021-07-13 Thread Moti Morgenstern
Hi, I noticed that the enumerated values supposed to be under "identity evpn-service-type" actually use "base evpn-redundancy-mode". Regards, Moti Morgenstern Packet Optical Networks - Systems Architecture 30 Hasivim Street | Petah Tikva, Israel office: +972.3.9266258 | mobi

[OPSAWG] draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-00.txt: Why mapping-type points to multicast-gp-address-mapping rather than to multicast-gp-port-mapping?

2020-08-05 Thread Moti Morgenstern
-type refers to l2vpn-svc module. However, instead of referring directly to mapping-type or to multicast-gp-port-mapping (in l2vpn-svc module), mapping-type refers to multicast-gp-address-mapping. It seems a typo. Please look into this. Regards, Moti Morgenstern