Re: [OPSAWG] A review of draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-01

2022-01-19 Thread Wubo (lana)
helps. Thanks, Bo 发件人: OPSAWG [mailto:opsawg-boun...@ietf.org] 代表 Greg Mirsky 发送时间: 2022年1月17日 7:15 收件人: adr...@olddog.co.uk 抄送: opsawg@ietf.org; ippm-cha...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service...@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org 主题: Re: [OPSAWG] A review of draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-01

Re: [OPSAWG] A review of draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-01

2022-01-18 Thread Adrian Farrel
Hi Bo, Thanks for the positive response. Replies to you below. Summary: all good! Best, Adrian >> Looking at Figure 1, an obvious question is why this model doesn't augment the >> L2/L3NM or the common VPN model. It is OK (for me) that you have chosen to >> augment the network topology model, b

Re: [OPSAWG] A review of draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-01

2022-01-18 Thread Wubo (lana)
Hi Adrian, Many thanks for your valuable and helpful review. Please see the reply inline. Best regards, Bo > -邮件原件- > 发件人: Adrian Farrel [mailto:adr...@olddog.co.uk] > 发送时间: 2022年1月17日 0:16 > 收件人: draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service...@ietf.org > 抄送: opsawg@ietf.org > 主题: A review of draf

Re: [OPSAWG] A review of draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-01

2022-01-16 Thread Greg Mirsky
Hi Adrian, the Authors, and All, thank you Adrian for reviewing the draft and inviting further discussion. I've commented on this work earlier suggesting considering the performance metrics listed in the STAMP YANG data model. I appreciate that the Authors have found them helpful and included them

[OPSAWG] A review of draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-01

2022-01-16 Thread Adrian Farrel
Hi authors, This draft has been safely inside the OPSAWG for a while, so I though it was probably due a review. "The usual" two top-level issues: - The draft expired earlier this month, so you need at a least a keep-alive version. - The draft has more than five front-page authors so the AD o