[OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-12

2022-12-19 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Eliot, Scott, Thanks for this document. Here is my AD review for draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-12. Moderate level comments: (1) p 3, sec 1. Introduction To enable application-layer discovery, this memo defines a well-known URI [RFC8615]. Management or orchestration tools can query

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-12

2023-01-06 Thread Eliot Lear
Hi Rob, On 19.12.22 17:25, Rob Wilton (rwilton) wrote: Hi Eliot, Scott, Thanks for this document. Here is my AD review for draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-12. Moderate level comments: (1) p 3, sec 1. Introduction To enable application-layer discovery, this memo defines a well-known

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-12

2023-01-12 Thread Eliot Lear
Ok, this is now posted as -13. On 06.01.23 16:28, Eliot Lear wrote: Hi Rob, On 19.12.22 17:25, Rob Wilton (rwilton) wrote: Hi Eliot, Scott, Thanks for this document.  Here is my AD review for draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-12. Moderate level comments: (1) p 3, sec 1.  Introduction     To

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-12

2023-02-07 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
6242]. The lowest RESTCONF > >> layer > >> is HTTPS, and the mandatory-to-implement secure transport is TLS > >> [RFC8446]. > -Original Message- > From: Eliot Lear > Sent: 12 January 2023 14:24 > To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) ; draft-ietf-opsawg

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-12

2023-02-27 Thread Eliot Lear
Rob: I think it's appropriate to accept all of your proposed changes with one caveat: On 07.02.23 14:50, Rob Wilton (rwilton) wrote: Hi Eliot, The only thing that I think that we need to tweak is the security section, where I think that we need to be more explicit that this module is not de

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-12

2023-02-27 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
: 27 February 2023 13:25 To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) ; draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access@ietf.org Cc: opsawg@ietf.org Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-12 Rob: I think it's appropriate to accept all of your proposed changes with one caveat: On 07.02.23 14:50, Rob W

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-12

2023-02-27 Thread Eliot Lear
ns to be included, but we can cross that bridge during the IESG review, if needed. Regards, Rob *From:*Eliot Lear *Sent:* 27 February 2023 13:25 *To:* Rob Wilton (rwilton) ; draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access@ietf.org *Cc:* opsawg@ietf.org *Subject:* Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-o

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-12

2023-02-27 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
cess@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access@ietf.org> Cc: opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org> Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-12 Rob: I think it's appropriate to accept all of your proposed changes with one caveat: On 07.02.23 14:5