[OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-08

2021-07-12 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi, This is my AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-08. Thank you for this document. Again, just minor comments/suggestions. 1. In section 3. Description of the VPN Common YANG Module "Encapsulation features such as" -> "Encapsulation features. Such as" "Routing features such as" ->

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-08

2021-07-12 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Hi Rob, Many thanks for the review. A candidate updated version can be seen at: https://tinyurl.com/vpn-common-latest Please see inline. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Rob Wilton (rwilton) [mailto:rwil...@cisco.com] > Envoyé : lundi 12 juillet 2021 17:15 > À : draft-ietf-o

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-08

2021-07-13 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Med, Please see inline, just a couple of points to resolve ... > -Original Message- > From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com > > Sent: 12 July 2021 18:35 > To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) ; draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn- > common@ietf.org > Cc: opsawg@ietf.org > Subject: RE: AD review of draft-ietf-

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-08

2021-07-13 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Re-, I updated the file to take into account your feedback: * Module: https://github.com/IETF-OPSAWG-WG/lxnm/commit/fcc9f6c1e79d5074469fe454d95770fe9f1becdb (in addition to the changes already reported as part of the L3NM review). * I-D: https://tinyurl.com/vpn-common-latest Unless you have f

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-08

2021-07-13 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Med, [Just to also close this thread/review.] I think that you are good to go. Thanks for accommodating my comments. Regards, Rob > -Original Message- > From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com > > Sent: 13 July 2021 16:17 > To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) ; draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn- > common