Re: [OPSAWG] Document Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-11

2022-10-09 Thread Qin Wu
-ietf-opsawg-sbom-acc...@ietf.org 主题: Re: [OPSAWG] Document Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-11 Hi Qin, Thanks for your review. Please see below. On 08.10.22 11:27, Qin Wu wrote: Hi, authors: I have read the latest version of this draft, it is well written, thank for that. Here

Re: [OPSAWG] Document Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-11

2022-10-09 Thread Eliot Lear
Hi Qin, Thanks for your review.  Please see below. On 08.10.22 11:27, Qin Wu wrote: Hi, authors: I have read the latest version of this draft, it is well written, thank for that. Here is the identified minor issues during document shepherd review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-11: 1

[OPSAWG] Document Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-11

2022-10-08 Thread Qin Wu
Hi, authors: I have read the latest version of this draft, it is well written, thank for that. Here is the identified minor issues during document shepherd review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-11: 1. Abstract said: " It may optionally be discovered through manufacturer