[OPSAWG] Document shepherd review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap

2022-07-07 Thread Adrian Farrel
Hi, I am your document shepherd for this journey. Thanks for your work on the document so far, this is my review of your draft. If you could work on updates or responses, I will continue with the process of the shepherd write-up. Hoping this gives you enough time to post an update before the IE

Re: [OPSAWG] Document shepherd review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap

2022-07-08 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Hi Adrian, Thanks for the meticulous review. Much appreciated. You may track a first set of proposed changes at: https://tinyurl.com/sap-latest. Let me know is more is needed. Please more context see inline. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Adrian Farrel > Envoyé : jeudi

Re: [OPSAWG] Document shepherd review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap

2022-07-08 Thread Adrian Farrel
Med, Thanks for this. Looking at it on my phone, it seems good. Maybe "YANG network model" would resolve the question. A On 08/07/2022 09:37 mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: Hi Adrian,