Re: [OPSAWG] Intdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-06

2023-11-21 Thread Randy Bush
hi > Reviewer: Sheng Jiang > Review result: Ready with Nits > > Obsolete normative reference: RFC 2818 (Obsoleted by RFC 9110) > Obsolete normative reference: RFC 6486 (Obsoleted by RFC 9286) fixed. thank you! > Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 8805 been to this

Re: [OPSAWG] Intdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-06

2023-11-20 Thread Joe Clarke (jclarke)
Thank you for the review, Sheng Jiang. OPSAWG appreciates it. Joe From: Sheng Jiang via Datatracker Date: Monday, November 20, 2023 at 06:36 To: int-...@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update@ietf.org , last-c...@ietf.org , opsawg@ietf.org Subject: Intdir last call review of draft

[OPSAWG] Intdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update-06

2023-11-20 Thread Sheng Jiang via Datatracker
Reviewer: Sheng Jiang Review result: Ready with Nits I have reviewed this document as part of the IntArea directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.