[OPSAWG] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-06

2024-03-29 Thread Gyan Mishra via Datatracker
Reviewer: Gyan Mishra Review result: Has Issues I have been selected as the Routing Area Directorate Reviewer for the draft below: draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-06 I reviewed the latest version 6 and the ideas behind the concept of the draft makes sense, however some additional recommendat

Re: [OPSAWG] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-06

2024-04-01 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Gyan, Thank you for the review. The candidate revisions can be tracked here: * https://boucadair.github.io/attachment-circuit-model/#go.draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac.diff * https://boucadair.github.io/attachment-circuit-model/#go.draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit.diff * https

Re: [OPSAWG] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-06

2024-04-02 Thread Mahesh Jethanandani
Hi Med, Just one comment. See inline with [mj] > On Apr 1, 2024, at 11:05 PM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: > > Hi Gyan, > > Thank you for the review. > > The candidate revisions can be tracked here: > > * > https://boucadair.github.io/attachment-circuit-model/#go.draft-ietf-opsawg-

Re: [OPSAWG] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-06

2024-04-04 Thread Gyan Mishra
Hi Med I reviewed the updates in the -latest version with each draft having a section 3 added “Relationship to other AC data models” is perfect. I believe this 4 draft solution for AC provisioning decoupling the bearer from the services will be very helpful for network slicing provisioning as w

Re: [OPSAWG] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-06

2024-04-04 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Gyan, Thank you. The new versions that address your review are now published. Cheers, Med De : Gyan Mishra Envoyé : jeudi 4 avril 2024 09:35 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org; rtg-...@ietf.org Objet : Re: Rtgdir early re