Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: L3NM and vpn-common documents

2021-04-09 Thread Adrian Farrel
ian -Original Message- From: OPSAWG On Behalf Of tom petch Sent: 08 April 2021 17:11 To: Dhruv Dhody ; mohamed.boucad...@orange.com Cc: opsawg@ietf.org; Joe Clarke (jclarke) Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: L3NM and vpn-common documents From: OPSAWG on behalf of Dhruv Dhody Sent: 07 April 2021

Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: L3NM and vpn-common documents

2021-04-09 Thread mohamed.boucadair
you. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : OPSAWG [mailto:opsawg-boun...@ietf.org] De la part de Dhruv > Dhody > Envoyé : lundi 5 avril 2021 20:17 > À : Joe Clarke (jclarke) > Cc : opsawg@ietf.org > Objet : Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: L3NM and vpn-common documents

Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: L3NM and vpn-common documents

2021-04-08 Thread tom petch
From: OPSAWG on behalf of Dhruv Dhody Sent: 07 April 2021 11:27 One comment on sr-te inline under Hi Med, On Wed, Apr 7, 2021 at 1:23 PM mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>> wrote: Hi Dhruv, Thank you for the review. Focusing on the vpn-common part: > draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common: > -

Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: L3NM and vpn-common documents

2021-04-08 Thread Roque Gagliano (rogaglia)
Hi Joe/team, I reviewed the L3NM document and created issues 266, 267, 268 and 269 to the GIT repository. - L3NM: Adding leaf for vlan virtual interface id - L3NM: Missing BGP update source for BGP clients - L3NM: BGP client, redistribute connected ipv4 / ipv6 addresses - L3NM: Multi-hop client

Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: L3NM and vpn-common documents

2021-04-08 Thread Joe Clarke (jclarke)
We are concluding the WG LC for this document. All of the IPR responses have been received (no IPR has been disclosed), and the LC precipitated a number of comments. The vpn-common module has just been updated, and there looks to be a pending L3NM update. As Adrian mentioned, he graciously stepp

Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: L3NM and vpn-common documents

2021-04-07 Thread mohamed.boucadair
12:28 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN Cc : opsawg@ietf.org; Joe Clarke (jclarke) Objet : Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: L3NM and vpn-common documents Hi Med, On Wed, Apr 7, 2021 at 1:23 PM mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>> wrote: Hi Dhruv, Thank you for the review. Focusing on the vpn-commo

Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: L3NM and vpn-common documents

2021-04-07 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Med, On Wed, Apr 7, 2021 at 1:23 PM wrote: > Hi Dhruv, > > Thank you for the review. > > Focusing on the vpn-common part: > > > draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common: > > - Not sure about the difference between the identity "sr-mpls" and > > "sr-te". > > Med: sr-mpls refers to RFC 8660, which states t

Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: L3NM and vpn-common documents

2021-04-07 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Hi Dhruv, Thank you for the review. Focusing on the vpn-common part: > draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common: > - Not sure about the difference between the identity "sr-mpls" and > "sr-te". Med: sr-mpls refers to RFC 8660, which states that TE is out of scope: The case where the outgoing lab

Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: L3NM and vpn-common documents

2021-04-05 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi WG, I support publication for both the I-Ds. Some minor comments - == General: - I guess the best practice for a section in the reference is "RFC : The title, Section X" instead of "Section X of RFC " - Both YANG modules could use more references (Example multicast part in L2NM) == dra

Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: L3NM [and vpn-common documents]

2021-03-28 Thread mohamed.boucadair
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Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: [L3NM and] vpn-common documents

2021-03-28 Thread mohamed.boucadair
rs 2021 20:57 > À : opsawg@ietf.org > Cc : 'Joe Clarke (jclarke)' > Objet : Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: [L3NM and] vpn-common documents > > Hi, > > WGLC review of draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common > > I was part of the design team calls that worked out it would be > possib

Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: L3NM [and vpn-common documents]

2021-03-27 Thread Adrian Farrel
node/ --- 8. leaf default-route s/route(s)/routes/ (twice) -Original Message- From: OPSAWG On Behalf Of Joe Clarke (jclarke) Sent: 22 March 2021 13:32 To: opsawg@ietf.org Subject: [OPSAWG] WG LC: L3NM and vpn-common documents Hello, WG. One of the action items out of the 110 mee

Re: [OPSAWG] WG LC: [L3NM and] vpn-common documents

2021-03-26 Thread Adrian Farrel
section also need to say: Documents that define YANG modules that make use of the YANG module defined in this document need to fully consider the implications of read and write access to the objects they use. -Original Message- From: OPSAWG On Behalf Of Joe Clarke (jclarke) Sent:

[OPSAWG] WG LC: L3NM and vpn-common documents

2021-03-22 Thread Joe Clarke (jclarke)
Hello, WG. One of the action items out of the 110 meeting was to put the L3NM (https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-l3sm-l3nm-07) and vpn-common (https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-03) documents through WG LC. The authors have said that these can work independently