Hi authors,

I am document shepherd for draft-boro-opsawg-teas-common-ac. I am preparing the 
shepherd writeup and have following questions.

Question 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate 
sections of the
   final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code,
   BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc;

  *   Referring to  
https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac-10.txt
 . It seems there a few warnings and errors. Are these resolved? If so, please 
send a summary.


Question 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See 
the [IESG
    Statement on Normative and Informative References][16].

  *   Please confirm this


Question 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to 
anyone. Did
    the community have sufficient access to review any such normative
    references?

  *   [ISO10589]. Is this reference essential to be part of the RFC?

Question 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and 
[BCP
    97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so,
    list them.
-  Please comment on following normative RFCs:
RFC 8174 category is BCP
RFC 7348 category is Informational and is already in DOWNREF registry
RFC 3688 category is BCP
RFC 2119 category is BCP

Question 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any 
existing RFCs? If
    so, does the Data tracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs
    listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the
    introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document
    where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.

  *   IMO the answer is NO. Please confirm.

Reza



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