Hi Julien，
Many thanks for your comments! Will address the comments and then post the new
revision for discussion ASAP.
Respect,
Cheng
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From: Pce [mailto:pce-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of julien.meu...@orange.com
Sent: Saturday, May 29, 2021 1:47 AM
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Dear authors,
Please find below the review of the aforementioned document.
_Summary_
The document looks ready for publication, but the fixes below should be
considered.
_Issues_
None.
_Nits_
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Abstract
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- The phrase "network opacity" feels like a negative objective. How
about "network c
