Thanks for your review, Sue.
Authors, thanks for all your work. Before we send the document to the RFC
Editor, please consider whether to make changes based on the OPSDIR review. I
agree with the points Sue has made; points 2 and 3 are about the description of
MAY clauses and there is room for
Reviewer: Susan Hares
Review result: Has Nits
OPS-DIR review:
Status: Ready with nits
General comment: Well-written, concise, and clear. The authors did excellent
work.
NITS - in the error handling (sections 7.2, 7.3, and 7.3)
1. section 7.2, paragraph 3, last sentence starting "Such a PCC"
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