Better late than never?
I like this. One might brighten the window a bit, but I like the composition,
the menu on the left, the pots... all very well seen and composed.
Rick
On Nov 27, 2015, at 1:44 PM, Boris Liberman wrote:
> Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).
>
> ht
examining the inside of those pots
at any one time. Kind of unappetizing.
Like the shot generally, along with the adjacent menu(?)
J
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From: "Bulent Celasun"
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Sent: Friday, November 27, 2015 12:12:09 PM
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rote:
Looks to be well exposed, but the subject and composition don't work
for me.
Kenneth Waller
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
- Original Message - From: "Boris Liberman"
Subject: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window
Please have a look and then your br
ct: Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window
>
>Ken, I can hear you about the subject. I mean - having heard others :-).
>
>But can you please explain in a sentence or two - what is it in the
>composition (or lack thereof) that does not work for you... I'd rather
>learn.
>
>
erally, along with the adjacent menu(?)
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>> J
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>> - Original Message -
>> From: "Bulent Celasun"
>> To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List"
>> Sent: Friday, November 27, 2015 12:12:09 PM
>> Subject: Re: Bori
Well it was the disarray of the dishes that sent the red flag my way -
or rather, might do so for others.
were the bowls and such neatly stacked it creates a different impression.
ann
On 11/28/2015 1:41 PM, Boris Liberman wrote:
I am fascinated by the fact that more than one person indicated th
Thanks, Ralf. Well, this is not Belgium, and even though Tel Aviv is
rather not too kosher, this specific places serves salads, quiches and
stuff like that. No seafood that I could see in the menu.
Boris
On 11/27/2015 23:53, Ralf R Radermacher wrote:
Am 27.11.15 um 19:44 schrieb Boris Liberm
posed, but the subject and composition don't work
for me.
Kenneth Waller
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
- Original Message - From: "Boris Liberman"
Subject: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window
Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say
I am fascinated by the fact that more than one person indicated their
dislike of potential hygienic issue here...
This is one of those small backstreet places in Tel Aviv that are
usually quite good, really.
Boris
On 11/27/2015 23:33, ann sanfedele wrote:
Looks like a place one would not wa
e. Kind of unappetizing.
Like the shot generally, along with the adjacent menu(?)
J
- Original Message -
From: "Bulent Celasun"
To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List"
Sent: Friday, November 27, 2015 12:12:09 PM
Subject: Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window
Tonally, it
Thank you for your kind words, Bulent.
I must say that the idea of trying to include shadow of a cook (or any
one behind that window :-) ) did not occur to me. I should certainly
keep it in mind next time...
Boris
On 11/27/2015 22:12, Bulent Celasun wrote:
Tonally, it is beautiful.
Compo
Am 27.11.15 um 19:44 schrieb Boris Liberman:
Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).
http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html
If this were in Belgium, with all the enameled pots in the window, I'd
suppose they serve mussels. So, what's on the
Looks to be well exposed, but the subject and composition don't work for me.
Kenneth Waller
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
- Original Message -
From: "Boris Liberman"
Subject: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window
Please have a look and then your br
Looks like a place one would not want to gointo toeat... I like
Bulent's suggestion of shooting it straight on, but there
are probably reasons like reflections or not being able to back up to a
position where you could shoot straight on. I'm wondering
if there is more to the story if one could
Friday, November 27, 2015 12:12:09 PM
Subject: Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window
Tonally, it is beautiful.
Compositionally, I might consider a closer, full-frontal view of the
window part.
More importantly, I feel that a human element (shadow of a cook
inside?) might also contribute.
G
Tonally, it is beautiful.
Compositionally, I might consider a closer, full-frontal view of the
window part.
More importantly, I feel that a human element (shadow of a cook
inside?) might also contribute.
Good to see you productive :)
Bulent
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Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).
http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html
Boris
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